While I think that to some extent you are tyring to compare apples and oranges here, I do fully agree that lighting makes all the difference. Compare these three photos of the same coin.
The first was taken using an industy-standard setup (but not by me). The second, using the method that I have traditionally employed. The third, using the setup I have just spent the last 3 (frustrating) days getting right.
Light strength and direction, camera angles and many other seemingly insignificant factors such as manual/AI focusing, white balance, distance from the lens, shutter speed, aperture size, etc, will all affect the way your photo
comes out. Trial and error are really the only way you will learn what works for you.
Just so you know, the first picture can be obtained with an expensive, but efficient rig in about 5 seconds.
The second image was taken with a method and setup that took me 6 years to learn.
The third image, as I say, took a
good 3 days to set up.
Your photo is already of a high
standard. Spend a
bit of time getting to know your camera, play around with different light sources, angles etc, and soon enough you'll be taking even better pictures. Keep practising and you'll continually improve.