Hi sing,
Dealers have often told me that they use lemon juice on silver coins. But I've never heard of someone using it on bronze coins.
I also like the "before" coin better. You shouldn't have stripped the
patina.
I agree with the above posters that a skilled mechanical cleaning would have yielded better results, without stripping the
patina.
Stripping the
patina also makes your coin more susceptible to
bronze disease. Sealing it with Renaissance wax should prevent that.
Since you stripped the original (dark green-ish)
patina, maybe you can try applying an artificial
patina (of the original color) before sealing it with wax.
Meepzorp